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原帖由 ForestPraise 于 2008-12-6 10:23 发表 
NOTD in StarCraft ConstructionStoryline.
Transmission log...
Alpha company debriefing...
(debrefing wud mean that the begining is actualy the end of the story, so your like recapping the events. like someone is reading the report.)
*Report given by ( name .. host,, leader ),A meteor was dropped in a location near a minning area ( meteor idea was from someone above who also posted), after a few weeks, disturbances of a near by minning corp of missing workers and strange sounds, mitiltary actions was taken to prevent any misleading information that might lead from the near by meteor crash..... *
EXTRACTION
*terrain might be desert or jungle..depending if you are able to place a cave like part in the terrain. screenshots of this idea was on the starcraft site in screenshots. showed people and minning equipment.*
the marines who play will either be together or like notd:am spread out around randomly on the map but the target would be set on a little mining area, wheres theres like 2 supply depots, maybe a barrack some doodads that show the minning concept and caves with a few workers.
The marines are to go and find information about the area, grab supplies near the minning corp medic supplies, then suddenly a cave collapse and shit unburrows near the cave or gets spawned, marines take action by taking out the waves. The minners automacticaly go near a bunker thats also around the supply depots. after a few waves, the minners suggest blowing the caves. Then the marines must help the minners as much as possible for them to set charges to destroying the caves. there might be .. 2 - 3 caves?
After caves has been sealed, one of the minners called for a evac, and a chopper comes and takes them away, XP gained by how many minners that are alived.
*OR..
Something releated like the BHD crash..
after the mines have been sealed, radio is out, supply trucks are nearby area must bring the trucks to the minning area because its too dangerous for the minners to go off alone.
Second Chapter.
"Investiagation." ( got the idea from the guy who metioned bout the meteor)
Battlion rings in the team.. saying the must locate the meteor and establish a secure premeiter of it.
So the meteor is spawned somewhere on the other side of the map where the rines are.
the marines then go and find it while being attacked by a few waves here and there.. when they reach the meteor a boss will pop out .. something like a strong ultralisk like creature.
kill it,, get XP for reaching the meteor.
now you defend it like the person said .. through different waves..
near the last few waves battlion says
the team for extracting the metor is on route hold your position.
then the boss comes out and a final wave, boss in my view would be somethinglike a loki.
like a muta. or somthing
supplies will be dropped .. or we could have a little minning town near the area where supplies can be found. where it will then be used for the waves.
a team arrives they take the meteor and then chapter is done.
Chapter 3.
Elimination.
After the following events of chapter 2... the marines find themselves in an awakrd position because of these monsters, or dead zombies that seem to orginate from this meteor.
Battlion tells the marines that thers a nearby "death/execution site" near the area where it was once used to purge(kill) the dieased people on the earth. they believe the meteor might have cause some mutation in the area.
They are then sent to burn or destroy the this execution site. and arraving there theres many waves u have to fight through.
battlion drops a powerful bomb that will destroy the area. you must go and find this bomb and then plant it in the site and evacutate it.
Mission XP gains are from getting the bomb, planting and denonating it in a time limit for extra XP.
Afterwards batlion tells you that the scienteist have descovered that the meteor was giving off a mutation to the corpse but they managed to contain it and now they must elminate a nearby infestation of a abadoned town.
few waves they fight into the town. maybe lil surprises along the roads. Another bomb has been dropped. go get it plant it explode purge the town.
Xp given for destroying town.
After town has been destroyed a boss will come.. something along the lines of prom?little weaker.. have to surivie for a bit until a evac ship comes (maybe make it so theres 2 chances. if the evac ship gets destroyed) then when u reach evac a carrier comes out from the sky and destroys boss and disappears .. leaving the marines confused of the situation.
Then the ending.
*Debrefing of Alpha Company complete.
Reported conclusion. Marines suffered imass illusions and were sent to be psychologicaly altered...
Transmision log end..........
add some stuff in the middle here and there. little extras.. my basic view of a good notd storyline.
在星际争霸（我很惊讶他能正确的翻译这个词语……）NOTD建设
故事情节。
传输日志...
阿尔法（估计这里和X的作用相同，属于个代号而已 ）公司汇报...
（ debrefing wud意味着一开始实际上是故事的结束，所以您想recapping的事件。像有人阅读报告。 ）
*所提供的报告（名称..主机，领导人） ，流星投在一个位置附近minning区（流星雨的想法是从上述的人谁也） ，几周后，干扰了附近的minning股份有限公司失踪工人和奇怪的声音， mitiltary采取行动，以防止任何误导性的资料，可能导致从附近坠毁的流星..... *
提取
*地形可能是沙漠或丛林..而如果你是位能够像一个洞穴中的地形。截图这个想法是在星际争霸网站截图。表明人民minning设备.*
海军陆战队谁发挥将会是共同或类似notd ： 10:00左右展开随机在地图上的目标，但将设立一个小矿区， wheres theres像第2供应站，也许营房一些doodads ，展示了在概念和minning洞穴几个工人。
海军陆战队是去找到有关该地区，抓住用品minning附近的医疗用品公司，然后突然一个洞穴崩溃和狗屎unburrows附近的山洞或获得催生，海军陆战队采取行动，采取了波。该minners automacticaly去附近的一个掩体，多数民众赞成还围绕供应站。经过几年波，建议的minners吹洞穴。然后，海军陆战队员必须帮助minners尽可能为他们设置收费，破坏了洞穴。可能存在.. 2 -3洞穴？
洞穴后已密封的，其中一个minners要求evac和一把菜刀来，并考虑他们离开， XP中获得多少minners是alived 。
*或..
releated东西一样5:00崩溃..
之后，地雷已被封锁，广播电台是出，供应卡车是附近地区必须把卡车的minning地区，因为它太危险的minners去单独关闭。
第二章。
“ Investiagation 。 ” （有想法的家伙谁metioned回合流星）
Battlion环队..说，必须找到流星雨，并建立一个安全的premeiter的。
因此，流星雨是某处产生的另一边的地图在rines的。
海军陆战队然后去找到它，而被攻击的几个巨浪这里和那里..当他们到达流星老板将弹出..就像一个强大ultralisk喜欢动物。
杀死它， ，获得XP的达到流星。
现在你想捍卫它的人说..通过不同的波..
附近过去几年波说battlion
球队提取metor路线是握住你的立场。
然后，老板出来，最后波，老板在我看来将是somethinglike一洛基。
像一个突变。或somthing
供应将下降..或者我们可以有一点minning附近的地方用品可以找到。它然后将用于波。
一个团队到达，他们采取的流星雨，然后章工作要做。
第3章。
消除。
经过下列事件的第2章...海军陆战队发现自己在一个awakrd立场，因为这些怪物，或死的僵尸似乎orginate从这个流星雨。
Battlion讲述了海军陆战队的thers附近的一个“死亡/执行网站”附近的地方曾经是用来清洗（杀死）的dieased人在地球上。他们相信，流星可能会引起一些突变的地区。
他们然后传送到烧伤或破坏这种执行的网站。和arraving有许多theres波ü必须通过斗争。
battlion放置了一个威力强大的炸弹，将破坏该地区。你必须去找到这个炸弹，然后工厂在网站和evacutate它。
团XP的收益是获得了炸弹，种植和denonating在一个时间限制的额外XP中。
此后batlion告诉你， scienteist有descovered的流星给予了突变的尸体，但他们设法遏制这种现象，现在他们必须elminate附近侵扰的abadoned镇。
他们几波打击到该镇。也许小小惊喜沿道路。另一枚炸弹已被放弃。去得到它爆炸装置清除城市。
XP中给予摧毁小镇。
在城镇已被摧毁老板会..一些大意舞会？稍..有surivie为位，直到evac船舶来（也许使它的会员第2的机会。 evac如果船舶得到被毁） ，然后到达时，吕evac承运人出来从天空和摧毁老板和消失..离开海军陆战队混淆的情况。
然后结束。
* Debrefing阿尔法公司完成。
报告的结论。海军陆战队遭受imass幻想，被送往是psychologicaly改变...
传输日志结束..........
添加一些东西在中间这里和那里。小演员..我的基本观点的一个很好的notd故事情节。
在线翻译给出的东西，很好，很脑残= =
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